“The first time my father hit my mother, he used a bouquet of daisies.”
That was my line, my memory, my most guarded secret. And I was reading it in the debut novel my best friend of twenty years had just published.
For two decades, I had been the quiet anchor to her glittering kite. I was the one who listened to every drama, every triumph, every minor problem she could blow up into a crisis.
She listened to my stories, my pain, my entire life poured out over late-night phone calls and cheap wine. I thought I was confiding in a soulmate. It turns out I was dictating my memoir to its thief.
Her novel, *Ashes and Wildflowers*, was my history, polished and packaged for public consumption. She stole my father’s tragic charm, my mother’s hidden sorrow, and even my uncle’s ridiculous conspiracy theories.
She even had the nerve to thank me in the acknowledgments. She called me her muse.
A fraud never gets the details right, and my best friend was about to learn that I had a lifetime of receipts to cash in.
The Shadow in the Ink: A Celebration’s Strange Echo
The text message lit up my phone with a string of champagne bottle emojis. *Big news, Chlo! Bigger than big! We HAVE to celebrate. Tomorrow? The usual spot?*
It was from Bethany. Of course, it was. Bethany’s life was a constant string of capital letters and exclamation points. For twenty years, I’d been the quiet anchor to her glittering kite, the one she’d call for every drama, every triumph, every minor inconvenience that she could inflate into a Shakespearean tragedy.
“Bethany has big news,” I said to my husband, Mark, who was trying to fix the perpetually leaky kitchen faucet. He grunted, a sound that could mean anything from “That’s nice” to “Is dinner ready?”
“She wants to celebrate,” I added, scrolling through her text history. It was a highlight reel of her life: promotions I’d helped her prep for, boyfriends I’d counseled her through breaking up with, apartments I’d helped her paint. My own life was a quieter stream, one I navigated mostly in my own head and on the thousands of pages I’d typed for my memoir.
A strange prickle of unease traced its way up my spine. For the past six months, Bethany had been uncharacteristically vague about her new “creative project.” Whenever I’d mentioned my own writing, how I’d finally untangled the knot of my parents’ disastrous divorce or found the right words for Uncle Mike’s ridiculous but lovable conspiracy theories, she’d gone quiet, steering the conversation back to herself with practiced ease. It was a subtle shift in our dynamic, a new wall in a friendship I’d thought was made of glass.
I typed back, *Of course! Can’t wait to hear!* The lie felt slick on my fingertips. I wasn’t sure I could wait to hear it. I was afraid to.
The Unveiling
The coffee shop buzzed with the low hum of afternoon chatter. Bethany was already there, practically vibrating in her seat, a triumphant smirk playing on her lips. She wore a bright red dress, a color that screamed *look at me*, which was, after all, her entire brand.
“Okay, you’re not going to believe this,” she said, her voice a conspiratorial whisper that carried across three tables. “I can’t believe it. It’s been my dream forever, you know? Since we were kids.”
I smiled, a genuine one this time. Whatever my reservations, I did want her to be happy. “Just tell me, Beth.”
She took a deep, dramatic breath and clasped her hands together. “I got a book deal.”
The words hung in the air. For a second, my world tilted. A book deal. That was *my* dream, the one I’d been working toward in stolen hours before dawn and late into the night for the better part of a decade. I’d told her everything about it—my hopes, my fears, the crushing weight of trying to get an agent to even glance at my manuscript.
“Bethany, that’s… that’s incredible,” I managed, the words tasting like ash. “A novel?”
“Yes! A novel,” she squealed. “It just poured out of me, you know? It’s a fictionalized family drama. Sort of a dark, quirky story about a young woman navigating a really complicated, messy upbringing with a charismatic but troubled father and an aloof mother.”
My smile froze. A cold dread, heavy and metallic, began to pool in my stomach. I thought of the chapter I’d just finished, the one I’d read to her over the phone two months ago, my voice thick with emotion as I described my own charismatic, alcoholic father and my mother, who’d retreated into a world of books to escape him.
“It sounds… familiar,” I said, my voice carefully neutral.
Bethany just beamed, completely missing the undertone. “Well, all great art comes from a place of truth, right? I just took all that universal pain and made it my own.”
Whispers on a Page
The dread followed me home, a greasy film I couldn’t wash off. Mark saw it on my face the second I walked in the door.
“Bethany’s news wasn’t good?” he asked, drying his hands on a dish towel.
“It was great,” I said, my voice flat. “She sold a novel.” I explained the premise she’d described, watching his brow furrow in confusion.
“That’s… your book,” he said simply. He’d lived through every word with me. He’d held me when I’d cried writing about my father’s funeral and laughed when I’d perfectly captured my Uncle Mike’s catchphrase: *“It’s a funny old world, ain’t it?”*
“It’s probably just a coincidence,” I said, trying to convince myself. “Lots of people have dysfunctional families.” But the details she’d hinted at felt too specific, like a distorted echo of my own voice.
Later that night, unable to sleep, I crept downstairs and opened my laptop. My fingers trembled as I typed Bethany’s full name into the search bar, along with the word “author.” Her new author website popped up instantly, slick and professional, featuring a photo of her laughing, head thrown back, the very picture of effortless creativity. And there it was: the publisher’s announcement for her debut novel, *Ashes and Wildflowers*.
I clicked the link. The marketing copy swam before my eyes. *“A stunning debut about Elara, a young woman haunted by the ghost of her brilliant but self-destructive father, a failed musician who named his guitar ‘Lady Day.’ Elara finds solace in her eccentric Uncle Finn, a retired postal worker whose belief in alien visitations is matched only by his unwavering loyalty. But when a long-held family secret about her mother’s past comes to light, Elara must confront the very foundation of her identity…”*
I stopped reading. My heart was a jackhammer against my ribs. Elara. My protagonist was named Clara. My father, a failed jazz musician, called his Gibson guitar ‘Lady Day.’ And Uncle Mike—Uncle *Finn*—was a retired postal worker who was convinced he’d been visited by aliens in 1978.
This wasn’t a coincidence. This was a carbon copy. This was theft.
The Weight of a Lie
My pre-ordered copy of *Ashes and Wildflowers* arrived two weeks later. The Amazon box sat on my doorstep like a benign-looking bomb. I carried it inside and left it on the kitchen counter, walking past it a dozen times, my stomach twisting into a tighter knot with each pass.
My son, Leo, home from school, picked it up. “Hey, isn’t this your friend’s book? The one you were talking about?” he asked, flipping it over. “Cool cover.”
I snatched it from his hands, my reaction sharper than I intended. “Don’t,” I snapped. He just stared at me, surprised. I softened my voice. “Sorry, honey. I just… need to look at it first.”
That evening, after Mark and Leo were asleep, I sat in my writing chair, the one where I had poured out my soul onto the page for years. The book felt obscenely heavy in my hands. The cover was a watercolor of a desolate field with a single, defiant red poppy. It was beautiful. It made me sick.
On the back was Bethany’s author photo, her eyes sparkling with unearned confidence. The acknowledgements page was the first thing I turned to. My eyes scanned the list of names—her agent, her editor, her parents. And then, at the very end: *And to my dearest friend, Chloe, my muse and my rock. Your stories have always inspired me.*
*My muse.* The phrase was a lit match dropped on a trail of gasoline. She wasn’t just admitting it; she was thanking me for the rope she’d used to hang me.
My hands were shaking so hard I could barely turn the page. I forced myself to start with Chapter One. The opening line hit me like a physical blow.
*“The first time my father hit my mother, he used a bouquet of daisies.”*
It was my line. My memory. My secret, the one I’d shared with Bethany one drunken, tear-filled night a decade ago, a confession I had never told another living soul. And here it was, printed and bound for the world to see, attributed to her.
The Anatomy of a Theft: My Life in Her Words
I read all night. The living room grew cold around me as the hours bled into one another, but I couldn’t stop. It was a macabre, paralyzing train wreck, and I was strapped to the front of the engine.
Page after page, my life unfolded in Bethany’s cloying, overly-sentimental prose. She’d taken the raw, jagged pieces of my history and sanded them down, polished them into something more palatable, more marketable. My father’s grim battle with addiction was now a romantic tragedy. My mother’s crippling depression was an elegant, quiet sorrow.
She’d stolen everything. The name of my childhood dog, a scruffy terrier named Patches, was now the name of Elara’s beloved pet. The specific, mortifying story of how I’d lost my virginity in the back of a Ford Pinto was there, twisted into a poignant coming-of-age moment. The unique, nonsensical lullaby my grandmother used to sing to me—it was there, word for word, a treasured memory now cheapened and exposed.
She even stole the names. She’d changed Clara to Elara, Michael to Finn. But my parents, whose real names were David and Sarah, were right there on the page. She hadn’t even bothered to disguise them. It was a level of brazenness that was almost pathological.
The worst part wasn’t the big tragedies; it was the tiny, specific details that no one else could have known. The way my father always smelled of peppermint schnapps and Old Spice. The secret fort I built in the woods behind our house, which I’d named ‘The Kingdom of Is.’ The small, white scar above my left eyebrow from a childhood accident. All of it was there, woven into her narrative as if plucked from her own imagination.
By the time the sun began to cast a watery gray light through the window, I had finished the book. I closed it and sat in the silence, the pages feeling contaminated, radioactive. She hadn’t just stolen my story. She had colonized my memories.
A Ghost in the Mirror
I stumbled upstairs as if in a trance. Mark was already awake, sitting on the edge of the bed, a worried look on his face.
“You were down there all night,” he said, his voice soft. He looked at the book in my hand, then back at my face. “It’s as bad as you thought.”
I couldn’t speak. I just nodded, a wave of nausea rolling through me. I sank onto the bed, and the dam broke. The sobs came from a place so deep inside me I didn’t recognize the sound. They were ragged, guttural moans of violation and fury.
Mark wrapped his arms around me, pulling me against his chest. “Okay,” he murmured into my hair. “Okay, Chloe. We’ll figure this out.”
“She took everything, Mark,” I choked out, my face pressed into his shirt. “She took my *pain*. The things I was most ashamed of, the things that took me years to even write down… she just put them in a book to sell.”
He was quiet for a long moment, just holding me. Then he pulled back, his eyes dark with a protective anger I hadn’t seen in years. “She doesn’t get away with this. There’s no way she gets away with this.”
But how? The ethical labyrinth of it was dizzying. Could you copyright a memory? Could you sue someone for stealing the essence of your life? My most private moments were now public, fictionalized entertainment. Strangers would read about my family’s deepest wounds and think it was just a story. They would cry for Elara, a fictional character built from my actual tears.
I felt like a ghost, my own life story now belonging to someone else. I looked in the mirror and saw a stranger, a woman whose history had been scooped out and served up for mass consumption.
The Invitation
I spent the next two days in a fog of rage and disbelief. I re-read passages of the book, comparing them to my own manuscript. The plagiarism was staggering. Entire conversations were lifted, verbatim. The structure, the timeline, the emotional arc—it was all mine.
My mind raced. How had she done it? Then I remembered all the times she’d asked to read my pages, offering “feedback.” All the long, wine-fueled nights where I’d poured my heart out, thinking I was talking to my best friend, my confidante. I had, in essence, dictated my memoir to its thief. The betrayal was so profound it left me breathless.
On the third morning, my phone buzzed on the nightstand. A text from Bethany.
*Hey you! You’ve been so quiet. Did you get the book?? I’ve been dying to know what you think of it! Your opinion means more than anyone’s. Let’s do coffee this week so you can tell me everything! Can’t wait to hear what you think!!!*
The sheer, unmitigated gall of it sent a jolt of pure adrenaline through me. The string of exclamation points felt like tiny daggers. *Can’t wait to hear what you think.* She wasn’t just a thief; she was a sadist. She wanted to watch me praise her for the artistry with which she’d filleted my soul.
I stared at the message, my thumb hovering over the screen. A part of me wanted to unleash a torrent of fury right there, over text. To type in all caps until my fingers went numb.
But another part of me, a colder, more deliberate part, took over. This couldn’t be a screaming match over iMessage. This had to be done face to face. She needed to see the devastation she had wrought. She needed to be held accountable, not with emojis and exclamation points, but with cold, hard reality.
*Tomorrow at The Daily Grind sounds good,* I typed back, my fingers steady. *10 a.m.?*
The reply was instantaneous. *Perfect! Can’t WAIT! XOXO*
I put the phone down and looked at her book, sitting on my desk. I knew exactly what I was going to do.
A Calculated Calm
The next morning, I didn’t feel numb anymore. I felt a strange, crystalline calm. The rage was still there, a white-hot coal in my chest, but it had been forged into something solid. Something sharp.
I showered and got dressed, not in my usual jeans and sweater, but in a tailored black blazer and dark pants. It felt like armor. I put her book, *Ashes and Wildflowers*, into my tote bag, along with a slim file folder containing twenty pages from my own manuscript, pages I knew were almost identical to passages in hers.
Mark watched me from the kitchen doorway as I gathered my things. “Are you sure about this, Chloe? Maybe you should talk to a lawyer first.”
“I will,” I said, my voice even. “But first, I need to do this. For me.” He saw the resolve in my eyes and didn’t argue. He just came over and kissed my forehead. “Call me the second you’re done.”
On the drive to the coffee shop, I rehearsed nothing. I didn’t need to. The words were etched on my heart. I wasn’t going there to plead or to cry. I was going there to deliver a verdict.
I walked into The Daily Grind and saw her sitting at our usual corner table, a triumphant smile already on her face. She waved, a bright, oblivious flutter of her fingers. For a fleeting second, I saw the two decades of our friendship flash before my eyes—the shared apartments, the secrets, the laughter, the tears. All of it now felt like a long con.
I walked to the table, my steps measured and sure. I was no longer the quiet anchor to her kite. I was the storm that was about to tear it out of the sky.
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